There was this beautiful blog by Kamal Roohani, which I came across and got inspired to write the below few lines. It talked about The FLUTE..
Enjoy reading..
एक छोटा सा बांस का टुकड़ा,
होटों से छूते ही ,
कुछ रूहानी सा कर जाए |.
ज़िन्दगी की चाल को एक नए सुर पर ले जाए .
भूल कर सारे गम , उसके सुर मे हम बह जाए .
ज़िन्दगी को एक नयी मकसद नयी दिशा वो दे जाए |
Lovely and awesome words Shilpa and i too will add in Hindi but English Hindi. Two or three stanzas for u “Krishna Bhagwan ke Haath me Joh Bansi Awe, Joh Uski Madhoor Si Awaaz se Gopiya Bhi Jealous Ho Jaye, kyuki flute mei joh jaadu hai woh krishna ko bhaiye and uski meethi awaaz dhoor, dhoor, laiya jaye. ” Let me know how I have written further to your beautiful poem. So beautiful picture too Shilpa. Loved it.
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🙂 awesome.. ehehehe
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Hehe in my broken hindi
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Beautiful ❤ ❤
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Kushnaseeb hoo mein, Jo yeh roohani dhun roz sunthi hoo, meri bitiya jab bajathi bansuri.
Beautiful Shilpa. I relate to it so well as I get to hear it’s melody everyday😍
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Wow Radhika what a talented lot u guys are.. u an amazing writer, son a genius and ur daughter an artist.. I am blessed to know a person like u.. a biiiiggg huuggggg…
God bless u all.. 😊
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Thanks for your biiiig huggg Shilpa. Just a normal family with varied interests. We encourage our kids to look beyond books and pursue their hobbies too!!
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Awesome….👍👍👍👍
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Thanks for reading and liking it 😊
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“एक छोटा सा बांस का टुकड़ा,
होटों से छूते ही ,
कुछ रूहानी सा कर जाए |”
😍😍😍 AWESOME Di…it was so beautiful 😍💕😍💕😍💕😍💕
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Thank you Veerey.. 🙂
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Welcome Di😊
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I have not read it, i have felt it.
beautiful…
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Thanks.. 🙂 it’s a beautiful compliment.
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A beautiful set of lines. completely Loved it.
I almost swayed with the rhythmic tunes of the flute. 🙂
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oh my my.. thank you Moushmi.. i am so glad u enjoyed reading it.. 🙂
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Adabhut rachana
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Thank you Shweta.. I am glad u liked it.. 🙂
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Welcome dear
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🙂
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Yahi Hai Bansuri Ki Aihmeyat
Jo Krisna Ne Gopiyon Ko De kar
Unka Jindagi Sanwara tha
Jaise ki Aap Ab Sanwar Rahen Hain
O Surila Nagme Yaad dila Rahen Hain
Great Shilpa!
Shiva
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🙂 your unique way of appreciating someone’s work is so nice.. I often smile reading your comments.. Thank you..
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it was good that i read kamal’s version a couple of days back. So it was easy for me to understand your version.. nice, nice..
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Thank you Akhila..
I generally get inspired by others.. 🙂
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beautiful described flute,,baasuri ki dhun pr radha mohit hokar krishna ke pass daudii chali aati thi :))
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Beautiful continuation.. thank u… Har wo shaksa kisi jo pyaar karta hai prem ke awaaz par kheecha chala aata hai.. 🙂
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Kya baat hai…. beautifully written… I just love listening to flute… it takes me to a whole new level
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A beautiful Music is kind of a divine journey..
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Lovely post
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😊 thank you..
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Lovely……….beautiful……
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Thank u 😊
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